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The evening of the first kiss (NaBloPoMo day 27)

June 27, 2010

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It was a rainy evening,

It was a good time for a walk.

It was an evening to spend on the balcony,

It was a good time to talk.

It was the evening of the first kiss,

It was a good time that I miss.

© Neha Kapoor

16 Comments leave one →
  1. June 27, 2010 9:52 pm

    it rained,
    i had a walk while it poured,
    i spent that time,
    talking all the while,
    reminiscing the first kiss,
    the one i so dearly miss.

  2. June 27, 2010 10:41 pm

    How sad it is that we lose so many special moments in life…and are left only with the ‘what ifs”…thanks for sharing your words.

  3. June 28, 2010 2:32 am

    beautiful !! 🙂

  4. June 28, 2010 3:07 am

    This post and the last one seem connected, …lovely.

  5. June 28, 2010 5:13 am

    beautifull…..but can’t understand.

  6. Vinay permalink
    June 28, 2010 7:19 am

    wow..really nice …
    short and sweet 🙂

  7. June 28, 2010 9:23 am

    very nicely written.

  8. June 28, 2010 12:47 pm

    The best part of your posts is those are very short, very clear and so well written and expressive.
    Very nice post

  9. hero heeralal permalink
    June 28, 2010 6:35 pm

    the sensible comments on ur blog get deleted .. is the praise dat u addicted to ?

  10. June 29, 2010 12:09 pm

    i like the style 🙂

  11. June 30, 2010 4:31 pm

    I like both! The post as well as the very first comment 🙂

  12. June 30, 2010 6:24 pm

    @heroheeralal i hope you realize that we live in a democratic country and we have the right to express ourselves..if you have a problem with something…you should be polite about it. thankyou.
    @neha well written.


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