The evening of the first kiss (NaBloPoMo day 27)
June 27, 2010
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It was a rainy evening,
It was a good time for a walk.
It was an evening to spend on the balcony,
It was a good time to talk.
It was the evening of the first kiss,
It was a good time that I miss.
© Neha Kapoor
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Neha Kapoor
Serendipity 
it rained,
i had a walk while it poured,
i spent that time,
talking all the while,
reminiscing the first kiss,
the one i so dearly miss.
Ha ha that’s a terrific response Alok!!
I loved it too 🙂
How sad it is that we lose so many special moments in life…and are left only with the ‘what ifs”…thanks for sharing your words.
beautiful !! 🙂
This post and the last one seem connected, …lovely.
beautifull…..but can’t understand.
wow..really nice …
short and sweet 🙂
very nicely written.
The best part of your posts is those are very short, very clear and so well written and expressive.
Very nice post
the sensible comments on ur blog get deleted .. is the praise dat u addicted to ?
I would approve sensible comments, but not abusive language.
i like the style 🙂
I like both! The post as well as the very first comment 🙂
@heroheeralal i hope you realize that we live in a democratic country and we have the right to express ourselves..if you have a problem with something…you should be polite about it. thankyou.
@neha well written.