Pitter patter goes the rain…
September 4, 2009
Here to wash away the pain.
The sound of rain is serene,
I’m sure outside it’s a marvelous scene.
But I’d rather stay in bed,
For the rain reminds me,
Of your hands.
Gentle yet strong.
© Neha Kapoor
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.” ~ Oscar Wilde.
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hey excellent and simple poem.. so sober..
Thanks a lot!
Love your poems, Neha.
Thanks so much Sols!
Very nice and short poem.
How do some of you get so much talent????
aww thats really sweet. thanks!
ummmmmmmm thats goooooood…
really good
ohho Hitchy liked my poem huh! thankooo!
nice rhyme 🙂
thanks!!
Beautiful!!!
thanks Prats 🙂
Your still in bed ??? You sick ??? I knew it, because of the rain, na? Get well soon.
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How you’d wish that huh! 😡
fantastic!!
thankoo!
nice one … short simple sweet !
lovely!!! 😀
loved this poem, just like the rest!! short and impactful! 😀
thanks like always 🙂 You always encourage me
and i like the new theme and colour tooooooo!!!!!
FRESH!!! 😀
hugs!!!
hugs galore!! 😀
Bhery bhery naaice!! 😀 cute poem
Regards
Abhishek 😀
thankooo soo much 😀
Nicely done. Keep it up :0)
Thanks Meera! Glad to see you here
awesome, great lines…
thanks 🙂
Haila! Romantac…
😛
Rain Rain Go away
Come again another day
Little wants to play
Rain Rain go away!
© Suji!
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.” ~ Oscar Wilde.
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Little ————– Wants to play*
This is a first time visit.. Nice page 🙂
I love rains , posts on rains, poems on rains & talks about rains !! 😉 That was a sweet romantic poem.
I love rains too 🙂
How lovely was that !
thankoo thankoo!
I AM REMINDED OF THE RAIN IN SPAIN.
Ah! Its that lovely is it? 🙂
Rain and Romance !! a perfect combo …. nice poem …
Thanks so much.
subtle emotion.well captured !
Thanks Aahang 🙂
Oye! Sept 13 ho gaya!!!! we want result update! 😀
The imagery here was incredible. I could feel the pitter patter of the drops, I swear! Loved it.
Oh thank you 🙂